Good use of simplicity.i can honestly say tht ths is th first poem on ths site tht th poet attemptd at drawin emotions 4rm th reader nd somewhat succeeded...nd ths waz achievd by jas a combination of simple thoughts instead of boombastic ideas tht rily express nothin.back 2 th poem howeva,th poem z not at ol perfct nd tht is becoz o th 2nd stanza,it jas didnt fit in,it kinda feels lost admist ol th otha beautifl stanza.am nt sayin its not sposd 2 b thea,bt tht u shud re-write it wth more sincerity nd emotive flow.4/5