Comments : Coffee Shop Love

  • 15 years ago

    by RoseBlood

    Hey this is so sweet, like love at first side.:)
    Don't worry if he didn't come to sit next to you, he'll probably do it the next time you meet in th coffee shop.
    So sweet, love at first side :)
    5/5Great rhyming.

  • 15 years ago

    by Cara

    Aww this was really sweet, i think the thing that we tend to forget is that guys get nervous too.. its always left up to them to do the work, but im sure they get intimidated by us.

    This tiny feelings tell no lies.

    ^^ This line.. just didnt sound right.
    This tiny feelings.. should be, These tiny feelings.

    Great poem though :]
    5/5