Very powerful write, i love the way you've made a chorus as well, it fits really beautifully in.. and the fact that the poem is built up slowly and taking speed at the end it very powerful effect.

5/5 Arun

It's all cool...........

Well Ash that was quite an emotional poem, you got your message across so very loudly, a very sad poem of an expensive lesson.
And at the same time an angry one telling someone of the high cost of playing with your love and emotions.
Well done 5/5

Grant

Luvly poem yet again.. keep sharing ur poems... it feels so good to read.. pain at times & at times a story to smile 4 a while

Wow after reading this I will definatly be reading your other poems. Very touching, very emotional, its grabs you and drags you in, you can't help but feel the emotion the saddness, pain, and anger. It was amazing. 5/5

Wow! you said you were amazed by wut i wrote, i have to say the same about this poem. it was incredible and there were so many lines i loved in it. you told every part of this really well and it had good flow too, great job! 5/5