Oh my.

This one almost made me cry.. Lol, its soo.. beautiful detailed and written. I can't believe it.

Fantasy.

This is gorgeous.

The flow is nearly flawless.
A couple of your word choices were unique, but turned out really well.

Great work!~

~Missy

Aw i really like this it seems more like your missing someone who is right there and i really like it its easy to relate to and its pleasing to your audience but that should be what you aim for

Aawww such a cute, sweet, lilo love poem!!

Another sweet poem. great writing i love the rhymimg pattern. 5/5

Thas poem i would do
i really like thast poem reminds meof my special someone.

hey read my newer poems i really need some feed bk thanx

5/5 for ur poem!! xx

This poem is amazing
5/5
It flow very nicely and well its beautiful

Amazing. This is extremely well written. Extraordinary job

Very heartfelt poem love the title i miss you :)