Comments : I Swear

  • 10 years ago

    by Dark Secrets

    Wow! that just knocked me out of my chair!
    Your words are wonderful and your poem flows perfectly, mostly I can easily relate to this feeling and I know how it feels to stuggle inside with a secret like that.
    This lines spoke it all:
    "Those secret looks and the touch of our eyes
    It is admiration in a clever disguise
    Or maybe I just got carried away
    Because you'll never fall in love with me anyway"

  • 9 years ago

    by Em

    Your poems are truly amazing. 5/5, Em