Comments : Hidden Secrets

  • 15 years ago

    by Faithless

    Wow Maddy i like how you took the title, express it and convey your message.I think the repeated question kindda works in this one as whenever the question is being asked, u get a different answers. Indeed all of us have secrets and like you said it in away shapes our lives.Excellent Job;)

  • 15 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Okay wow what a piece that speaks the truth. Maddy, I don't know what to say. As I was reading this I was like nodding my head and saying yes yes yes.. haha. Youre absoultely right.. I'm one of those people that holds the same secret.. nobody really knows that I write poetry.. We all have our secrets. :] I just loved everything about this piece, not only did you talk about secrets but also lies and whatnot. Your last line sumed it all up for me.

    Well done dear.
    :]

    5/5.

  • 15 years ago

    by Domino0792

    Incredible poem. Such emotion, hidden within each word. I really enjoyed this. Keep up the amazing writing.

    Great read. 5/5.

    -Droplett.