Comments : My Wings Open Wide

  • 11 years ago

    by Armada the Gestalt

    Ahaaaa, I like this one a lot.

    BUT. 'Quit'. Biiig big no-no! It completely sticks out. Stop would do. 'Quit' is quite collquial, and the rest of the poem is suitably distant and aloof. Only one word though, don't fret.

    But yes, not much else I can pick out. Part of me wants to know a little more, actually, is it about a character, or simply an idea?

    This avian menace quite intrigues me, not so much the unfortunate angeless.