Comments : Relieving tears

  • 15 years ago

    by Ares

    The end of this poem really touched me. really well written, it was so descriptive!

  • 15 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Very beautiful write Noor ... very touching ...

    "Someone drowned my dreams
    But I fought back to gather pieces together"

    ^^ very touching lines ...

    "And smile again
    It is winter
    But there is spring in my heart "

    ^^ when i read these I was like "Wow"... there's so much beauty in these verse ... the feeling of joy... positiveness... optimism... loved it... and loved the imagery too :)

    beautiful write :)