"Hit me and I will fall
But the beauty of it all,
Though it's never that appealing,
Is, I've mastered this cold feeling
& I will not go down. "

Wow hun what a powerful, amazingly ending stanza..
I gotta admit this wasn't you best..but still your style is very good and you keep on amazing me =)

Random rhyme..very interesting wording and such a great topic!!
Write on
Adoring your poetry xx