This poem is really good i like it alot.

the only thing is i think you say '' the boy '' alot..

like instead of the boy you could of wrote he or somthing like that in some of the places, because it gets very repatative.

but its a very awsome poem i enjoyed it

5/5

This reminds me of my boyfriend. there's a sadness inside him i can sense but that he won't talk about. It's something i want to figure out, but he doesn't want me to know.
He has your name, but he doesn't live in australia. ;) good work as always. i loved it. you're amazing at writing love poems. 5/5