Comments : The girl

  • 15 years ago

    by Cara

    I am sure teddy bears all over the world, hear their 'owners' problems. When you dont have anyone else to talk to, they seem to always be there lol.
    The ending was a bit sad.. it wasnt quite what i was expecting.
    Nicely written.

  • 15 years ago

    by Mister 47

    Another sad till my tears can be shown in my eyes, perfect poetic configuration , and the tedy bear usage was original and very good.

    scars? hurt yourself .. if you want to die jsut tell me i will kill you but dont do liek that.>.<

    great poem , pinned wordrfully , but i dont like the idea that you are passing throught that
    >.<

  • 15 years ago

    by xx

    I love, love, love it. It is a really good poem, but it is sad. If this portrays how you feel, I hope that you will start to see the beauty in life.

  • 15 years ago

    by Faithless

    Well though this poem is tragic, i can sense the innocence of the little girl. Well i also like the idea of having a teddy bear as her only friend. I'm sure many can relate to this poem as most of us grew up with clutching on to our teddy bear.It was a beautiful write.
    Though seriously i dun want you to do tt to urself.If you need someobne to talk to u can alwayz PM me

    Cheers
    5/5 from me

  • 15 years ago

    by Jennifer

    That is somewhat like my girl in tears poem very nice yet sad too! well done!