Comments : Knock, knock

  • 15 years ago

    by Smilesunshine

    Wow this is absaloutly amazing, i enjoyed reading it very m uch. you have a great way with words.

    it was very intense
    and kept me interested in reading it

    "Sighs, I can't catch my breath
    Cries, there's no comfort in our death
    Bleeding, fingers screeching down my soul
    Staring into Guilt's jaws that form a gaping hole"

    that was deffinantly my favorite part, it gives you such an erie feeling.

    very well done

    5//5

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    This was fantastic