You certainly captured and expressed lust very well in few words. Like the first comment, slow start and the last two lines speed the read up. Good job once again. 5/5

Very good description of the lust ingrid, indeed it is raging ^_^ now calm down girl lol
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Excellent :] Steamy, i like it. I really liked this form, i think it fitted really well with what you were saying. Very great description of lust, i really enjoyed this write.
It just shows how endless your talent is :)
5/5

Wow! What a very descriptive poem, and yes, where would we all be without Lust!! lol!
Again, you show your superb talent of being able to provide scintillating imagery in so very few words!
You have a real talent Ingrid!
Your words take on a life of their own.
Now I must take a cold shower! lol!!!

Tyburn? Tyburn? Come on, woman! Surely you're making them up now, lol.
Ingrid, every time I look over your poems I see another form that you are knowledgeable of whilst I flounder in the dark of ignorance!
Lust! Temptation is indeed a wicked foe when dressed as lust.
Great write Ingrid and all the very best
Ben