5/5 getting better and better, this was very well written, great ryme!

You send out a powerful message about how mature and wonderful the person has become and how they can share that with other people. Nice work.

Well written! I read through a few of your other poems, and this one stuck out the most to me and here's why...

First off, the poem was well written with a nice flow. The meaning behind this write was very deep and actually brought a few tears to my eyes.

Secondly, unlike your other poems, you didn't use an abundance of I, me, he, she, her, his and so forth in this write, which actually increased the deepth and made this a better write in my opinion.

Overall, nice simplistic write with meaning that others may be able to relate to. Well done and keep up the good work!

Peace, Joe