Nice format, Silvia!

Ah yes...country life:)
I have lived in the city for a long time now, but my heart remained in a little place called "Zevenhuizen", translated that means: seven houses, lol. When I lived there, there were indeed only a few houses, such a small village it was. Me and my brother were very happy there. We played outside always, on the dusty roads, barefoot and happy:)
I hope to be able to return to the county side one day.

Hugs,

5/5 Ingrid

Country Life, i love it. I hate it too sometimes, but when i consider all things, it wins out in the end. Yeah, i enjoy things in the city, im a shopaholic, but its always nice to come back to the country at the end of the day. Where no loud noises exist, where nature is at its best.
Your poem described it so beautifully, it was amazing. I really liked the form too, it was an interesting one, indeed.
Really nice write :]
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I love your thirst to try out new forms every time ... a true port indeed ... and each time you come up with such wrilliant work ... really thanks for sharing ... its such a great help for amateurs like me :)

I felt the motion in each line... I guess you were writing about the winds ... and with it each object was moving ...

beautiful write :)

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I love your thirst to try out new forms every time ... a true poet indeed ... and each time you come up with such brilliant work ... really thanks for sharing ... its such a great help for amateurs like me :)

I felt the motion in each line... I guess you were writing about the winds ... and with it each object was moving ...

beautiful write :)