Wow, this is amazing. I love the ending.
I can totally relate..
Keep writing and good luck with everything

I love this one too, and can relate to it too.

your voice makes my tummy sing
and your kiss makes my heart melt

^ I like these lines they are funny but the truth to some.

Good write . . . . 5/5

I'm stupid to even think
your here to stay
I'm stupid to even think
you will love me forever and a day

*This was my favorite stanza. I can really realte to what you're saying. I think you did a great job with clearly expressing your feelings. Don't call yourself stupid babe, we all believe people when they say what we want to here. Doesn't make us stupid. Keep it up. Nik*