Comments : Could Have Been

  • 15 years ago

    by Aish

    Nice work-i can relate to this-2 of my poems (first sight pts 1 and 2) are kinda similar in subject matter. next time-just go out on a whim-make conversation, go for the chase, you never know unless you try! i got the guy in the end!
    But the poem itself-not long, but long enough-says exactly what you want it to-use of the last line very effective.

    5/5
    aish