Comments : I Gave Up On You

  • 15 years ago

    by Benny Boi

    O _0 ... Wow... great way to release that pent up frustration hun. Really hope everything gets back on track for him, and yourself.

    The poem by the way, was very raw... powerful... and a great release for you i hope.

    My love goes out to you hun!

    Be safe

  • 15 years ago

    by Obscura

    You poem was very powerful and heartfelt you have a lot of anger it needed to be paragraphed but apart from that it was really a exelent piece of work

  • 15 years ago

    by Mommys Lil Angel

    I kno how u feel i left my dad and wen i lost him he tried to be there for me and he came around more and more and then wen i needed him most he wasnt there so dont think jst kuz hes showin up more that he'll be there wen u need him hes gonna be there wen he needs u and thats it and i could feel the anger very good i mean if thats wat u were ruttin for

    well all my love
    katie