Comments : Submission

  • 15 years ago

    by Not Enough

    That's sad,,, great poem though.

  • 15 years ago

    by Good Enough

    Never give up, never

  • 15 years ago

    by Mister 47

    Mmm, intresting poem , submisssion and rape , it can happen even with husband and wife, and not with strnager, raping is a comon thought that descibe falsy only stranger attacking you sexualy . at least that is what most of pepole think .

    as usal you pined it very good , and with very expressive and clear words, i like the simplicity adn the imagery used, and how you pined exactly the feeling fo do your job and leave

    i wonder how can you pinnn this so perfectly , the exact feeling and so . amaizing description , short one , (i lvoe short ones)
    and very expressive , and simplicity i can say again amaized me in thsi piece , i think i am going to put it in my favorite ^_^

  • 15 years ago

    by kelleyana

    This is sad indeed, it is my wish it does not happens to you and just the fruit of your imagination, nothing more. As usual i enjoy your write. It left me thinking... Very well done, 5/5, kel.