Wow Sasha..Lucky me I'm the first to comment.
I sooo loved the meanings hidden in your piece.
I'm in awe..this was very good hunnie

Tears fall like rain
Irrigating the seed
From the root to the stem
sadness I bleed

Beautiful stanza..I really loved it, I don't know what to say but this gave me chills..amazing wording.

Loved the ending a lot, this piece is going on my fave..of course after that one entitled "the forbidden kiss"
I love your poems

Write on
Love you :]

Well certainly i don't see any imperfections here only perfection is the word which describes this poem.I like the way you used the rose a metaphor to describe how you feel about urself.You have penned it down beautifully.

But then grew a thorn
A sign of imperfection
Although sweet and lovely
I recieved much rejection

^^ I like how you describe the thorn of a rose as the flaws...itz realli very imaginative of you

Excellent Job

"Trust starts wilting" i thin there is something wrong in the last word i think , forgive me if i am not but maybe it si "waiting".

the last stanza hit me like a thunder i love it .

roses , petales and thorns, god made the roses sacha this way , beautifull , lovely , extraordinary to watch , and made the thorns too , soo the bad men that want to hurt that rose know they will be hurt .

thorns are not bad thing . everyone have throns . just i hope you dont have scars, these are the hard one to heal ..

lovely poem , your rhyming , .. jsut perfect words asmooth easy and simple ... i would say keep your syllables count in order a bit but that did not affect the poem much

you still have my vote 5/5

Because kissed by the sun

This is one line that really stood out because it doesn't really make sense .. But I really love the last staza . It's really easy to picture your writting . The flow is really good , except for in a couple spots its a little off . There were alot of places that I found should have punctuation .. But that's up to you . 5/5

Oh wow sasha.It was a nice piece and I felt that this is the same thing that I do...hiding your sadness behind those fake smiles...
Inshallah sis everything is going to be fine and good again...

well done.5\5..

I liked it alot and just remeber only you can change your position in life no man can do that for you...