Comments : Need You

  • 16 years ago

    by RachiBubbles

    I will help you with making it easier to read and sounds alot better while reading it the way i have it... no words changed at all just putting in spaces :)

    I know we may complain,
    And tell you we don't care,
    That there is much to gain,
    Whether or not your there.

    Most of these aren't true,
    No matter what they say,
    We will always need you,
    Each and every day.

    Every time we're sad,
    Or any time we're happy,
    Even if you make us mad,
    Even if you act real sappy.

    We will always need you there,
    To see us through the good and bad,
    Even if your not always fair.

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    otherwise it was well written good job! 5/5

    keep up the great writing :)