Wow i like how you poured out ur emotions on this poem. It is uniquely portrayed how ur love is.I can feel how u felt sorry for her and wanted to help her.It was an excellent write indeed.Keep it up

Excellent Job
5/5

Ohh btw juz one more thing tt i wanna add i think u meant once instead of onece;)

Wow, good work love:) i loved that poem keep it up:)... how is everything with that are you with her ? or not?

Awe it was so sweet and a little sad, but i loved it. great job. oh and thanks for ur comment on mine

Ally