Described wonderfully.... describes a place i'd rather be as i write this it's 43degrees and its 8:15pm. I love the line From freezing flakes to ball. Great work for your first nature poem 5/5

I think it is short but it is good. lol. 5/5 in my book.

Aww I thought this was really cute. Imediately from the start I understood what you were talking about!!

5/5

~Stefanie

I found this to be cute. A short adorable poem that everyone can relate to. It seems to be told as if to be read for a young child and I really liked it.

"From the chilly sky to Earth

From freezing flakes to ball"

^These first two lines were absolutely adorable. A wonderfully written poem. 5/5

This is a BRILIANT poem .. I loved it so much! LOL. Very well done :]
Keep up the good work!