Comments : I got over you

  • 15 years ago

    by Not Enough

    This is a great poem. It has a great flow to it. My favorite two lines were
    "It's funny how life can turn things around.
    Is hilarious how lame you're looking right now."
    I love it! Especially the second line. I can't really explain why but I just reallylike it lol.
    I also like the ending, the line...
    "Now that the sun of my life is shining again"
    I'm not sure if it's what you ment but it seems like you're trying to say that you gt over him/her. And I'm very proud of you for that. Since not many people can. Some people are glued on breakups forever trying to makeup but they nver will.
    Great poem5/5

    SP

  • 15 years ago

    by Annaam

    I like it. The simplicity Of it and the way yOu've made it shOrt but still expressed yOur feelings... GoOd JOb! :)

    5/5.
    Keep It Up! :)