Comments : Come back and give me life

  • 15 years ago

    by Smilesunshine

    I noticed this poem only has a 3.0 score and that is completly wrong this is deffinantly 5/5 you did amazing with the emotion, and with your rhyming scheme, your words fit together perfectly it flowed nicely, i love everything about this poem

    great job
    deffinantly a 5/5

    I really like this line

    ''
    I wish I was tripping
    Over that empty suitcase by our door
    I wish I would just accept your love
    Instead of wishing I had more''