Two words: LOVED IT

Well another great write from you. Again you have nailed down the theme that you have explored.I like the idea of putting on a fake smile. You'll be surprise by how many people who actually looks happy are actualli depress. I just want to tell that you're not alone. Life is about the choices that we make...it's really up to us whether we make our life happy or sad.Keep up the good work

Excellent Job
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Wow, this is really deep. I love the simplicity of it. The flow was great. Just over all a great poem :)

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