I want you to know I am tired of always trying
And every day I am feeling sick of always crying
Yes , you can see how much I am smiling
But you know that inside, my heart is dying

^^^Extremely sad lines, CJ....

The poem was writen beautifully and you portrayed you pain really well.
I hope one day soon the sun will shine for you again, my friend:)

*hugs*

5/5 Ingrid

I like this poem my favorite line is

A broken heart is like a broken mirror on the floor
If you try to fix it you will hurt yourself more

it speaks so much 5/5

I can relate to this poem very much! I loved reading it! Great work!

Wow! That was a fantastic poem. It was full of emotion and very unique. You really described what it is like to be inlove and to have lost that person and to have pride and not show it.

"Why people need to lose the things they love most
So they know what they mean, and what they lost
If I am strong dose not mean I did not sleep crying
Smiles don't mean I 'm ok, it mean I 'm good at lying"

(These lines were the best and they really were flowing with emotion. )

Great ending 5/5