Comments : Magic Carpet Ride of Dreams

  • 15 years ago

    by Faithless

    Sasha you just mesmerized me with ur imaginary.It makes me wanna take a journey on a magic carpet ride.you have painted a beautiful journey of a prince & a princess. The words of choice used by u really brings the poem to life.Well i also like the idea this poem is written from the prince perspective and not only tt, u have manage to make it flow smoothly

    Excellent Job
    5/5
    5/5