This is really good.
It really came together at the end.
I really like it.
Good job writing.

This poem is just captivating... I like the idea of how this love revovles around secrets and temptation.The words of choice that you used and the imaginary was great. I could visualize how you painted this betiful story.Indeed your poems have improve tremendously and i proud of you Sasha.

Excellent Job

This poem was really interesting. It was well written and just wow I really enjoyed reading it.

Great Work