Comments : Doves

  • 15 years ago

    by HvN

    Great ryme, beautiful structure :}

  • 15 years ago

    by AngelicDecadence

    In case no one could understand, this poem is about murder and all that it causes. Not that of a dove, but of a woman. A mother. Its about how a "hunter" (AKA murderer) has found his "catch" (next victim) and has finished his task, but what wasn't shown in the police report would be that the woman was a single mother and had two baby children who were put into a foster system, and forgotten to the world, their mother being their only means of safety. The children will then probably suffer from abuse, being separated, or many other horrible things in the ruined system, but does anyone notice this? No. Because no one notices. No one is there until it's too late.

    (Completely Fictional, but just because the story isn't real, doesn't mean it doesn't happen. It does, I think one of the flaws is that people don't realize.)

    Good day.