It hurts when you are betrayed by someone who is a friend/lover, even more painful is that is takes a person a good deal of time before they realize it. Good job. 5/5

I saw you trough (did you mean I saw you through)

Of course we all have friends in life who we've known for a long time and they end up stabbing us in the back..it's painful and its something we least expect. I know its like to look back in the messages youve got from them, and it brings even more pain knowing how things used to be and how things are now. Your piece here flowed so smoothly Ingrid and had a lot of emotion in it. I can feel your sadness, and I'm sure many could relate to having a good friend of theirs stab them in the back. The unexpected happens in life, but we have to deal with it and move on. I hope as time goes on you heal from this, afterall you dont need friends who are going to be cruel and mean to you and do things to upset you.. I'm sure you have several other friends who are not like that and are there for you, and dont stab you in the back and are loyal friends.

Wonderful piece.
I could feel your emotion flowing through every word.

5/5.

Stabs in teh bak are always the most hated things anyone can have in his life ,

choosing your true friends become essential , and very much difficult in our days. and to recover from that , we always need to feel angry sometimes, and most of us revenge .

i hate that this ever happen to you my dear. i feel like i want to kick hsi butt. but that is not true i want to kick him somone else^_^

great oen dear, keep your heart clean and your soul pure and never let those pollute it ^__^

CJ

Ingrid, what a powerful piece. Betrayal is such a weird thing.. one minute you think you are cruising along fine, caring for your friend/love and then bam.. they betray you. It hurts terribly. The raw emotion that i felt in this poem, was brilliantly portrayed.
You are such a caring person and of course, some people might take that for granted. I hate to think that, because you dont deserve people who dont treat you like the wonderwoman you are. I hate to think that you were betrayed, but i cant see this poem being just a poem.. it felt too real to me.

Really great work.. it was a fantastic write.
5/5

Wonderful write... so full of emotions and pain and the anger both depicted so evry well...

well indeed you never know who will stab you when... people have become so unpredictable ...

"Needless to say, my friend
they were all about you"
^^ beautifully written ...

"I know in due time, dear friend
The path of truth will take it's course "

^^ well we can only pray that one day they will realise their folly or get a taste of their own mistake... well penned..

wonderful read ...

This poem just shoots back at the backstabber. Well it sux to have have those so called 'friends' who pretend to be ur friend but doing something nasty behind ur back. But then again these people will get thier retribution cause i know that an Angel will not do anything to hurt someone.It was a great write indeed and the message was conveyed clearly;)

Excellent Job
5/5

Sad indeed. Well i truly believed that a real friend cannot be a backstabber. What is real is pure, but what is fake will break any bound. It is my wish that these words are just the fruits of your imagination and you'd never came across a co-called friends like this. Very well done ingrid, 5/5, kel.

OMGG i love it!! so amazing!!!

Why have I never read this before? It's brilliant!! You have such a way with words ingrid, I could read your poetry over and over again, and never tire of it.. 5/5

Excellent write. As the reader I can feel the pain for the writer. It hurts to trust someone and get stabbed in the back. 5/5

A good write Ingrid on an interesting subject, and the poem rhymes!
I liked the flow of this poem Ingrid, and on a subject most of us have encountered in this life I suspect.