Comments : It Was Just A Dream

  • 15 years ago

    by Mister 47

    Dreams , and reality , are just too confusiong sometimes,

    some might think love is a bad thing , becasue after soo long dancing and feelings and sos trong emotions , they hit a very hard wall and get crushed,

    love is not a bad thing in my opingon , but it canbe bad int eh hands of false lovers.

    it is not love fault if the lovers dont match ,

    you pinned the rain from heaven (exceltent metaphore)
    and the last stanza you pineed my imagine taion to think it was really her dream or a wrong false love that gone bad

    great poem i enjoyed it
    flow was great teh storie flow was awesome i could not stop reading til the end

    you deserve my vote 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Shokry Al Qubati

    Well,

    I woke up in the morning
    Figuring out what I had just seen
    Until I finally realized
    Everything was just a dream.

    Such a wonderful poem!!! I really like it... ^_^

    keep it up 5/5

    regards,

    Shokry