When I read this for the first time, I didn't quite like the repetitions in the last stanza, but after re-reading this piece a couple of times I think that you created powerful ending there, with particles of notions that run through the poem, like a retrospective and more powerful insight on the message of the piece.

I like the whole idea for the poem, it's certainly refreshing and I agree with Auzy's interpretation.

The third stanza is my favorite. It's sad, with a hint of darkness, yet so captivating and beautiful. Your choice of words and the hellish atmosphere that you created there are flawless.

Whole piece holds overwhelming emotions which makes it quite powerful. Every stanza guides the reader to the new level of expressed feelings and impressions, to the effective culmination in the ending stanza.

Great write :)