Comments : Vision In Slumber

  • 15 years ago

    by Cindy

    Great job on this piece Jenn. I love the ending with the dream aspect.
    ((hugs))
    Cindy

  • 15 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    This is one of the best poem i have read lately. Awesome piece with so much depth.
    Loved the way you ended it.

    all the best and take care