Comments : If All Else Fails

  • 11 years ago


    My God. I absolutely fell in love with this from this first four lines I read. You portray the emotion perfectly in your words, and the story line is amazing! Great Job, really. :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden

    Nice. Throughout the poem I was thinking, okay this is under love, where's the love? Then at the end, there it was. Good idea leading the reader in to questions.