Comments : Doll Maker

  • 15 years ago

    by JCazares21

    This was amazing poem...it had a lot of illustrations.

    i think this poem deals with a lot of pain..mainly because the reader is the doll maker, instead of the one being created. i feel like the doll has given up and the dollmaker was her only option out...almost as if it was her last resort.

    Good job =D

  • 15 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    I interpreted as a take on the hype around external beauty... how people expect a girl to have a beautiful perfect figure ... loved the metaphor you have used ...

    "Don't you worry little girl,
    You'll be beautiful when this pain ends."

    ^^ its so heartfekt to see girls going under the knife for that perfect figure ... and its the society thats makes them do so ...

    wonderful write :)

    just as a Doll is lifeless and without emotions... people think we are dolls and could be modified into so called perfect shapes ... without realising how much pain it causes ...

  • 15 years ago

    by Faithless

    Wow this is certain a refeshing read. i like the concept of you dolling up a doll. It's something I never thought that i would come across but it's gd as the concept of writting it is pretty unique and throughout the poem, i can sense your passion for this doll that you possess as if it was ur bestfriend whom you always want to make her look beautiful. I really enjoy reading this. keep it up

    Excellent job
    5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Melvin LeVeque

    Good job girl! wow...i really liked the image in this poem.....where do you find time to write???? seriously