All I can do is laugh, lol. Oh youre such a clever lady.. I think many of us know theres a nice twist to this poem.. haha. I like when theres a twist in poems though, I must say I really enjoyed this because it stood out to me.. the title sounded so yummy, and as I read the poem I just knew there was a hidden meaning and maybe it wasnt really about real lollipops ;]

Hahaa.
Clever write.
5/5.

Hidden meanings are correct. I was drawn in by the title and as I read, I stopped and started it again. It takes you a minute or so to see the meanings. Good job. 5/5

This is short and sweet .. and portrays a perfect picture . I think I'm going to try to write one of these :) . From what i can see you followed the format perfectly .. So , 5/5

LOL at Porcy! Cute :]

Ingrid, Ingrid, Ingrid, what shall we do with you? Your poetry is fantabulous!
Well, your poem made me hungry. Haha, then i was like.. oo its not about real candy.. very clever :] I really like how you did it, so the reader had to look a little bit deeper for the real meaning.
Such a clever little cookie you are!
5/5