Aww Awda thi is really a sad write indeed. I can feel the pain and the hidden cries beneath this poem. I like how you describe your cries as lullaby of pain...Well it sux to finding it hard to breathe and to move on when our hearts is broken by the person who we gave our heart to....but then it again im sure that one day a prince will come and mend your heart. It's certainly a great write.Keep it up

Excellent Job
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I really loved the poem. The title drew me to this. A lullaby is mean to be smooth and smoothing but if its of pain then you truly described the title. I felt a sense of broken promises and hurt. Great work.