Awwww....thats soo sweet....i like it lots..
its awesome...

Heart broken that you were gone from my existence
Everyday praying countless times but it seemed hopeless
As time went by and all light gone from my heart
Resting on the roof, looking at the stars and making a last wish
Twinkling way up above stood a lone star
Shining so bright amongst all the other stars
^^^I love this part..and how u said that u were making one last wish and that one star stood alone shining so bright..
i love that....its a beautiful poem...

keep it up hun...
5/5
ExCeLlEnT!!!!!!
love ya