Comments : Stay Tonight

  • 15 years ago

    by Twisted Heart

    Wonderful poem. I envy anyone who can write free verse. I have tried, but alas, I am lost.
    You did a great job with this one.

    always
    Jeannie

  • 15 years ago

    by Cindy

    Jenn
    This piece just touched me so much.

    Death may own you
    But not in my dreams
    It could never steal you
    From my soul
    My clinging mind

    I pray
    This slumber never ends
    Just stay
    Hold me here
    Until God calls us home

    I love these 2 stanzas......I have been there so many times in my dreams.
    Great job!
    (((Hugs)))
    Cindy

  • 15 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Romantic and chilling too.... :)
    loved it all the way

    all the best and take care