I deffinatley think that your poem is good, Keep up the good work

I'm reading your poems backwards (from most recent to earlier) and I can really see the progress you've made. I really do likethe idea behind this one...and the poem itself is NOT bad.... just could use some work to make it a little more... uniform...I guess is the word I'mlooking for.

You really do have a lot of talent though.. and a gift for expressing your emotions