Comments : Paradise

  • 15 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Excellent work. I think that if we would all be honest, we wonder what it is like in heaven, would it be better than earth, are there really angels, will we really see our loved ones and be reunited. The last verse has a very powerful message, live each day to the fullest because we may not be here tomorrow. Good job. 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by sneha

    You poured out your feelings in this nice simple and lovely poem.I liked the style.5