Comments : You Are Poetry

  • 15 years ago

    by Twisted Heart

    "Have you ever take a moment
    To ask yourself
    How can you be nothing
    When you are everything? "

    I believe in the first line of this stanza, you meant to say taken instead of take. Otherwise a beautiful write. The ending two lines... just wonderful.

    Always,
    Jeannie

  • 15 years ago

    by Daisy if you do

    Sometimes we just need to take a step back and look at ourselves and the impact that we have on others and the world around us. This was a beautiful write and showed everyone is an inspiration, even ourselves. Great write.

  • 15 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    "How can you be nothing
    When you are everything? "

    ^^ these lines are so overwhelming with emotions ... beautifully ended :)

    lovely write

  • 15 years ago

    by Cindy

    Jenn
    This is a awesome poem. It says so much to the reader.

    Have you ever taken a moment
    To ask yourself
    How can you be nothing
    When you are everything?

    I love this last stanza and what a way to look at it.
    ~Clapping~
    (((Hugs)))
    Cindy

  • 15 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Now this one is very boosting, very motivating indeed. One should really never underestimate himself/herself. Great write dear

    all the best and take care