Comments : Will I Cry (Loop Poetry)

  • 15 years ago

    by Cara

    I love this form! I havent come across it before, but i really like it. What a clever poem that you have written here.. really well done. I dont even know what to say, it was terrific. Good use of emotions.. it really had me intrigued till the last line.
    amazing work.
    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Silvia,

    A lovely format:)
    I have an answer to your questions, maybe it will be of some use to you ( it is what I feel when I think of you):
    in spite of all ,your soul felt it needed to be with him. There is love, although he was not able to give it to you in the way your heart desired it. In this life we can only be who we are and for a short while we might be abe to act diffenrently to please our lover, but eventually we must return to the behaviour that comes naturally to us.
    I think that you will know just what he meant to you when he is no longer there and also that you will grieve over his loss:)

    *hugs*

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 15 years ago

    by kate

    One word:

    Brilliant.

    =]

  • 15 years ago

    by Faithless

    Wow i like how you penned this down. I think it is an interesting scheme. No doubyt that those are some of the questions that we will be asking when someone we love dies but you have portrayed it beautifully.No doubt that this poem is great but i think you can enhance it more if you were to put a question at the end of each question. But then again tts just my opinion...other than that it was really a delightful to read.

    Excellent Job
    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Raychil

    I loved this poem. And I must admit, I'ver never seen this style before. But I'm welcome to anything new and I'd love to try it. Wonderful piece here. It was so beautiful. I am a question writer as well so I love when others do the same, it really lets the reader see from the writer's side. <3
    <3Raych