Comments : Within the Shadows

  • 11 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    So overwhelming ... heartfelt write ...

    I felt so sad after reading it ... you have beautifully narrated ... and readers are left with a feeling that this may happen every day to the girl which makes it even more touching...
    child abuse is the most horrible crime commited against any minor ...
    wonderful write...

  • 11 years ago

    by Cindy

    Kaylee it is so good to see you posting again. This is a very deep and intense poem. Full of so much sadness. It is so hard to think that one person can handle so much heartache.
    Excellent job on this.
    Love Cindy

  • 11 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    This is very heartbreaking. Even thinking of this crime gives me shivering, but i am glad you wrote abt it...people need to read.

    Very nicely written

    all the best and take care

  • 11 years ago

    by Blissful

    What a heartbreaking write! Your use of words and detail really set the sad scene for me and it was as if I was seeing everything with my own two eyes. The depth here was mind blowing and the emotion was real. I hope this doesnt come from personal experiance but the way you wrote it was so real that it could only be scripted with real experiance. All in alll I enjoyed it although it broke my hearft. I like that you didnt go into detail what exactly happened because I made my own lil story while reading it.

    Well done.