The chorus or whatever you want to call it .. Haha i dunno , I don't write songs . But it had a really good flow to it , I really liked it . I wasn't much of a fan of the four lined stanza .. It threw everything off at that point :( .
We left everything
we ever knew,
unsure of what's
to come, <-
in the dark
we left it all,
unsure of what was true. <-

I thought it would be really cool if you could make the two lines with the arrows rhyme too .. It would be pretty sweet .

I love it. :]