WOW.. i am speechless.. Its absolutly brilliant. Amazing job =) definitely a 5/5
Thanks very much for your comment.
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"I'll get better, I always do.
But it never matters, because temporarily I'll be normal just like you.
Smile and laugh.
Until I just snap!"

I was astounded to see this part..."I'll get better, I always do." is basically all I say to my friends when something horrible happens. But in my mind I'm thinking "but only for so long before I snap again.." you captured this feeling very well and I will be bookmarking this poem =) Wonderful work.

Hmmm... I think the rhymes were kind of forced. But the flow was pretty good. If the rhymes were better the flow would be too. Good job.

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