I love the poem, but Darwins idea's are outdated, my friend. You need to read about the Intelligent Design Movement and then all will fall into place;)

*hugs*

5/5 Ingrid

Even though this is about nature, it has a somewhat humerous angle (to me) in the last two lines. We humans transcended apes by natural selection, sometimes I wonder if it should have been the other way around. Excellent work with the form. 5/5

Excellent poem my Homo sapien friend , no troglodytes here i see, HAHA well written Michael, you do know that Darwin denounced his own theory on his death bed i suppose.

Grant

So beautifully worded... describes so much ...
the theory of survival ...
and thanks for sharing the concept of this form so deeply ... would love to try it :)

brilliant write :)