Comments : I Never Knew It Like This

  • 15 years ago

    by JaM

    Great write. I love the concept of it; realizing just how much you love somebody, usually when you lose them.

  • 15 years ago

    by Nee

    Sarah..great poem sweetie.
    I loved the second part more than the first.
    I gave it 4/5 you know how honest my comments are. So I'm just gonna say that it wasn't your best.
    You have such a beautiful mind..gotta use your creative ideas in poetry..I know you can do it.

    Your title could've been better.
    The rhyme in the first part went a bit off..I'm not used to these poems of yours.
    Usually your flow goes really well and the wording goes more amazing.

    Write on hunnie =)
    xx

  • 15 years ago

    by Spanish Star

    Great poem..i could feel both the hurt and the anger. Keep it up ;)

  • 15 years ago

    by ThugPoet

    Hey sis' salaam alaikum = ),

    Nice write, I really liked it. I always find that the best poems are always the most true and honest. This had both.

    Good job, keep it up 5/5.

    Take care,

    Thuggy = )