Great write. I love the concept of it; realizing just how much you love somebody, usually when you lose them.

Sarah..great poem sweetie.
I loved the second part more than the first.
I gave it 4/5 you know how honest my comments are. So I'm just gonna say that it wasn't your best.
You have such a beautiful mind..gotta use your creative ideas in poetry..I know you can do it.

Your title could've been better.
The rhyme in the first part went a bit off..I'm not used to these poems of yours.
Usually your flow goes really well and the wording goes more amazing.

Write on hunnie =)
xx

Great poem..i could feel both the hurt and the anger. Keep it up ;)

Hey sis' salaam alaikum = ),

Nice write, I really liked it. I always find that the best poems are always the most true and honest. This had both.

Good job, keep it up 5/5.

Take care,

Thuggy = )