Comments : Emptiness

  • 15 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    "You, even with your broken wings
    Still found a way to fly away from me "

    ^^ very touching lines... i felt as if someone close to you has left you even though you tried hard make them stay ...

    wonderful write...

  • 15 years ago

    by Starlight

    Very touching write, this is cute lol

    5/5